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The twenty first century has presented women with the  possibility  of having babies even in their fifties or sixties, by use of new fertilisation techniques. But this new reality has not found a certain response to all societies questions.  Now people have to decide whether it will be a long-term awaited solution for those women who cannot afford to have a child due to their health problems or will it be likely for a woman to carry out her duties, ones which appear after child birth.

Naturally, women find happiness in motherhood. For most, it is their purpose in life to be able to give birth to a child and an inability here causes them to suffer, feel useless and empty. Therefore a chance to regain the ability to have a child of course fascinates women of all ages. It is woman`s right to choose whether to be happy being a member of “a full family” or to be miserable because she is unable to give her love to a newborn.

Nevertheless it is a controversial issue: if a fifty-year-old woman is strong enough to take care of a youngster. Children require a lot of time, patience and activity. Upbringing is not an easy process and the capability to handle all this when a woman is fifty or sixty is unfortunately doubtful.

I strongly believe that it would be against nature to forbid such women fertilisation techniques  as long as one important requirement is met – a woman must be active, healthy enough and able to realise what a great responsibility she is taking on by using the new fertilisation techniques for the purpose of having a child at an advanced age.

Original:

The twenty first century presents a possibility for women to have babies even in their fifties or sixties by using new fertilisation techniques. But this new reality has not found a certain respounse in the society. People now have to decide whether it is a long-term awaited solution for women who cannot afford to have a child for their health problems or it is unlikely for a woman to carry out her duties, which will appear after a child birth.

Naturally women find happiness in motherhood. It is their purpose of life to be able to give birth to a child and lack of this makes them suffer, feel aimless and empty. Therefore a chance to regain the ability to have a child will of course fascinate women of all ages. It is woman`s right to choose whether to be happy being in a full family or miserable being unable to give love to a newborn.

Nevertheless it is a disputable issue if a fifty-year-old woman is strong enough to take care of a youngster. Children require a lot of time, patience and activity. Upbringing is not an easy process and the capability to handle this all when a woman is fifty or sixty is unfortunately doubtful.

I strongly believe that it would be against the nature to forbid fertilisation techniques for women in late age but there should be one important requirement – a woman must be active, healthy enough and she has to realise what a great responsibility she takes using the new fertilisation techniques for the purpose to have a child.