1) Corrected:

I totally agree with the opinion that creative artists should not be restricted by government in any way. Artists need unlimited space, freedom and time for their work to thrive, otherwise society would never see the results of some of the greatest artists` work, which are part of our culture, heritage and history.

Restrictions can ruin the realisation of the whole artist’s idea, like a bird being in captivity would defenitely refuse to sing as beautifully as it did before, and this reluctance is not the act of stubborn creature, but the result of discouraging restrictions. Of course a true artist will find the way to create regardless of conditions or circumstances, but it won`t be pure art and the artist will be void of further development in terms of art.

If all kind of art were regulated by authorities we would never have been able to admire outstanding forms of architecture, paintings, works of literature, films etc.  Governments should give every possibility to artists to create and only observe the work in case of having to restrict the audience. I mean, some arts are too progressive to be shown to children or works may also demonstrate some kind of moral characteristics which might be considered unsuitable for society. Concerning this latter point, I believe private clubs for connoisseur or lay people themselves should be set up so as to decide what art is acceptable to them.

In order to preserve the natural development and purity of art  the artists should not be bothered by any limits government may set. And government in its turn should not stand in art`s way. In the end it is society arrives at a conclusion whether the art is worthy of appreciation.

2) Original:

I totally agree with the opinion that creative artists should not be restricted by government in any way. Artists need limitless space, freedom and time for their work to thrive, otherwise society would not ever see the results of greatest artists` work, which are the part of our culture and history.

Any restrictions ruin the realisation of the whole artists` idea, like a bird being in captivity would defenitely refuse to sing as beautifully as before, and this reluctance is not an act of stubborn creature, but a result of the discouraging restrictions. Of course a true artist will find the way to create under whichever conditions and circumstances are, but it won`t be a pure art and the artist is fettered to further development in terms of art.

If all kind of art were regulated by authorities we would have never admired an outstanding forms of architecture, paintings, work of literature, films etc.  Government should give any possibility to artists to create and only observe the work in case to restrict the audience. I mean, some arts are too early to be shown to children or works may also demonstrate some kind of ammorality which might be considered unhealthy for society. According to this assumption I believe there may be set up private clubs for connoisseur or people themselves decide what art is acceptable for them.

In order to preserve the natural development and purity of art  the artists should not be bothered by any limits government may set. And government in its turn should not be on art`s way. And in the end society makes a conclusion whether the art is worth appreciation.

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Happiness is a feeling that can’t be defined or measured because it means different things to different people. While some people find happiness in relationships, others link it with success and wealth. Yet others think they can find gladness only through the spiritual path rather than through material ones.

Happiness is not unachievable but still there are people who fail to achieve it. They should identify their own interpretation of happiness and the first step is to understand what they want. Self-awareness is vital, it is easier to construct a little plan to achieve happiness rather than acting randomly in search of happiness.

Awareness of personal wishes and the willingness to do everything to fill life with satisfaction are some factors of happiness, whether it is about love relationships, business success, sports progress, the welfare of our families etc. The right life goals help us to understand what is important in life and what is not.

Of course, there are many other factors which influenсe people, among them are a peaceful environment, good  health, personal skills etc. But people can live happily even if there is a lack of any of those elements. A tiny instrument for achieving happiness is to be able to adapt to a given conditions.

I believe that the main factor which contributes more to our happiness is self-awareness. Without clear perspective it is hard to achieve any kind of happiness. And yet people have to understand that their happiness is a result of their own work and efforts and they shouldn`t expect someone else to make them happy.

Original:

Happiness is a feeling we can`t define and measure because it means defferent things for different people. While some find their happiness in relationships, others link it to success and wealth. Yet others think they can find gladness only through spiritual path rather than through material one.

Happiness is not unachievable but still there are people failing to attain it. They should identify their own way and the first step is to understand what she or he wants. Self-awareness is vital, it is easier to construct a little plan rather than acting ramdomly on the way to happiness.

Awareness of personal wishes and willingness to do everything to fill life with satisfaction are the factors of happiness, wheather it is about love relationships, business success, sports progress, welfare of our families etc. The right life goals help to understand what is important in life and what is not.

Of course, there are many other factors which influenсe on people, among them the peaceful environment, good  health, owned skills etc. But people can live happily even with a lack of any of that. It should be like a tiny instrument for achieving the happiness – to be able to adapt to a given conditions.

I believe that the main factor which contributes more to our happiness is self-awareness. Without clear perspective it is hard to achieve any kind of happiness. And yet people have to understand that their happiness is a result of their own work and efforts and they shouldn`t wait untill someone makes them happy.